View previous topic :: View next topic |
Author |
Message |
marina.2188 Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 08 Sep 2010 Posts: 6
|
|
Back to top |
|
 |
Jemmz Council Member
Joined: 21 Oct 2006 Posts: 21154 Location: Ultra (DE)
|
Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 3:25 pm Post subject: This Love by marina.2188 |
|
|
This was a pretty vid! I love the music, and I really like the parallels you drew between Kate's scenes with Jack and some of the moments she had with Sawyer. Nice job  |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
Brooke Expert Vidder
Joined: 01 Jul 2008 Posts: 24129
|
Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 2:19 am Post subject: This Love by marina.2188 |
|
|
I agree with Jemma. I think audio would have really fit nicely into this, also I noticed that you had a trapped clip when you went back and fourth between Sawyer/Kate in the beginning. (That means a small clip was trapped in there and really jolted that scene, instead of it moving smoothly.)
To me, the scenes dragged on, and needed to be broken up by transitions/beat use. I think you have a lot of potential and create very interesting videos by the songs you choose.
I think you could really create some very interesting stories using audio. That's just my opinion as a fan of audio.  |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
|