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[Swoome]

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" Lost || Flight 815 Never Crashed || Trailer" 09-05-2010
The hydrogen bomb exploded and Flight Oceanic 815 lands in LAX as expected. But now the survivors of the crash do not know anymore. Theyre strangers.But they feel that something is missing and it makes them desperate.
Song: Acts of Courage by X-Ray Dog
Vidder: Moone
Length: 1:45 (36.82 MB WMV)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JWGT3W60wtY

[littleton_pace]

That was a nice idea for a trailer! I love X-ray Dog, their music is so trailer-worthy Although the title card that said "What if Flight 815 Never Crashed" was not on screen for nearly enough time; and the rest didn't really feel like a trailer but more a montage. A trailer is supposed to tease and entice and want the viewer to see more of the story; but there didn't seem to be a real story here, like I said it was more of a montage Just a note for next time, keep working at it
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[FaradayLinus]

i agree with kat that it came off more as a montage rather than a trailer, but aside from that it was a great idea and i liked your use of voiceovers

[eloramoon]

That was really cool! Nice job, Moone! Your beat use was pretty good and I loved the choice of music. My favorite thing was the way you reversed all the death scenes. That looked awesome! One thing you could try in the future to help bring a story together is make sure that all of your clips are relevant to the story you want to tell. That takes practice, though, and I'm still learning myself. Great job! Keep 'em coming!

[Swoome]

thank you guys for the comments and for the advices. It's really nice of you to help me to improve myself. *hugs*