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thefilmchick
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Hey there, Brooke!
I liked this; thought it was interesting, and I liked the timing of the clips. Neither Jack nor Sawyer felt overused to me; they felt like they were spaced out fairly amongst the Jacob/MiB bits.
Music choice was good: I liked the pulsing, pinging 'ominous' music, and I could hear the words over the music, so it worked well for background. My one sound quibble was the 'how important he is' line, which sounded much louder than everything else around it. I think that was just a levels gaffe, though.
This is a minor point: I'm not crazy about the teal coloring of the text, because it took my attention away from the words for a moment; I'd have suggested white there instead of teal.
Well done!
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Brooke
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| thefilmchick wrote: | Hey there, Brooke!
I liked this; thought it was interesting, and I liked the timing of the clips. Neither Jack nor Sawyer felt overused to me; they felt like they were spaced out fairly amongst the Jacob/MiB bits.
Music choice was good: I liked the pulsing, pinging 'ominous' music, and I could hear the words over the music, so it worked well for background. My one sound quibble was the 'how important he is' line, which sounded much louder than everything else around it. I think that was just a levels gaffe, though.
This is a minor point: I'm not crazy about the teal coloring of the text, because it took my attention away from the words for a moment; I'd have suggested white there instead of teal.
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Thank you. I felt I did better with editing the music this time then I do with most of my trailers.
The teal was only used because it's LOST's colors. LOL.
I don't know why the 'important he is' came out louder then the rest of it.
Thanks. I am always struggling with getting the music and audio just write so that one doesn't over power the other. |
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I thought you did a good job with the placement of the text! Trailers are hard. I agree with the color though it just didn't seem to go. I do understand why you chose it though.  Good scene choices too for Sawyer and Jack! It was fun to watch! 
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Brooke
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| nikkimonique wrote: | | I thought you did a good job with the placement of the text! Trailers are hard. I agree with the color though it just didn't seem to go. I do understand why you chose it though. Good scene choices too for Sawyer and Jack! It was fun to watch! |
Yeah trailers are difficult but are fun to do. I agree about the text's color. Yeah, lol that's why I did it. The Lost text.
Thanks, took me forever to go through the clips to get the ones that would look good of Jack and Sawyer. |
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Uruviel
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| Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 6:49 am Post subject: One Light One Dark Trailer (Ensemble) by Brooke |
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Cool trailer!  Good clip choices. |
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| Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 6:57 am Post subject: Re: One Light One Dark Trailer (Ensemble) by Brooke |
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| 88 wrote: | | Cool trailer! Good clip choices. |
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