Lost Video Island

LostLaura · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 07 Dec 2009 Posts: 9

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"Ben Linus: Recue Us All" 04-08-2010
What if Ben Linus is meant to save everyone on the Island? Perhaps he will be the true, redeemed hero. This was supposed to be a promo for season 6, but I didnt finish it in time. I think it still works well as a character study and reflection on purpos
Song: Exogenesis Symphony Part 2 by Muse
Vidder: LostLaura
Length: 2:26 (24mb mp4)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mw8plOmukAo

thefilmchick · Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 6:51 pm Post subject:

(Mods, you might want to correct the typo in the song listing?)

I liked the waking-up flinchy bit halfway through, and the song didn't feel as long as it was--if I had any quibbles with that, it would be to shorten the bit before the build-up flinchy bit halfway through, because I found my attention drifting at :30 or so (wondering if the drowsy piano line would continue), but the bit I cited brought it back.

Your font capitalization change didn't work for me--nitpicky critique, I know, but since it's a trailer, it mattered somewhat.

Credits clip: Zuleikha Robinson.

Some of the flashes on the beats 3/4ths of the way through felt a little off-target; they didn't quite hit on the beat to my eye.

The Jacob shot at the end seemed a bit misplaced: I know you showed Ben stabbing him but it did not entirely feel tied to the rest of the action.
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