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hellybongo Expert Vidder
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sweetevangeline Expert Vidder
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Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 8:43 pm Post subject: |
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Ooooh I really liked this! And don't worry about anything being basic, to be honest, in crossovers especially, basic is probably best, you didn't overcrowd the vid with effects and colours and whatnot
I loved the flashbacks you used to show j&k's relationship broke down and I really liked the car scene with k&d I think you could have tried to match up the colours/lighting/pan crop a teeny bit more to make it more realistic, but it didn't take away from the awesome story that you created, so great job! |
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ciaimpala Expert Vidder
Joined: 25 Nov 2008 Posts: 11823 Location: 221B Baker Street
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Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 11:31 pm Post subject: She Dont Want The World - Jack/Kate/Dean by hellybongo |
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Ooo Kate/Dean-I flove this pairing!!!
I agree with sweetevangeline that you could use more colorings/lighting/pan cropping to make things match up more, but you still told a really fantastic story really well-and I LOVED the ending. |
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Captain Freya Expert Vidder
Joined: 31 Jul 2007 Posts: 5298 Location: Scranton, Pennsylvania ;)
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:22 am Post subject: She Dont Want The World - Jack/Kate/Dean by hellybongo |
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Oooh.. I really liked this! I loved the bit where Jack attacked him in the hotel room. And, tbh, I didn't think the colouring matching up was that much of an issue. When I read the comments, I prepared myself for like, one bright blue scene, mixed with a yellowey dark scene, but I actually thought alot of the scenes matched up really well. I really liked the story. It was so simple, and I think that's what made it so believeable. I LOVE really complicated, dark, twisted AUs, but I also love AUs that could actually happen, where no-one gets murdered, or abused, or commits suicide - And that's what made me love this vid. The ending was so believeable.. and kinda sweet. |
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 30477 Location: With Anna Torv... somewhere ;)
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:54 am Post subject: |
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That was great! The scenes you choose to go with the lyrics was superb and really evoked emotion in me! I loved every min of it. I thought the coloring was just fine and you had some great AU scenes in there like that hot car sex. Loved the hotel scene too! Can't wait for part 2! _________________
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hellybongo Expert Vidder
Joined: 24 Jan 2007 Posts: 78
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:50 am Post subject: |
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Thank you all so so much for your comments. Means alot.
I'm really new to this whole crossover vidding thing and I appreciate you taking the time to watch and comment so thanks. I felt like a challenge and boy, wasn't it onw. How do you guys do it? Thanks for the advice too. I will probably be bugging you all again with questions now you realise
I'm a 35 yr old mother of two with not a lot of time but I love doing this....its a great way to relax even if they're not top notch! _________________
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 12:06 pm Post subject: |
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I'm a mom of 2 also soon to be 3 ...and I agree its a great sanity saver...haha...how old are your kids?
Keep vidding! I think you're doing great! Make more AUs for sure!! _________________
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EMMALOUISE Expert Vidder
Joined: 28 Jun 2009 Posts: 439 Location: England
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:46 pm Post subject: She Dont Want The World - Jack/Kate/Dean by hellybongo |
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Beautiful vid the song is fantastic i love this pairing your manips were very good loved the scene where jack pushes dean im looking forward to the second part |
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emmasholi Council Member
Joined: 02 Mar 2008 Posts: 15576 Location: Wigan, England
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 10:36 am Post subject: She Dont Want The World - Jack/Kate/Dean by hellybongo |
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Ooh I really liked this! Thought you told the story so well and the basic editing you used really helped and worked great! I loved how you could feel the emotion in this vid! I also thought that your colouring match-ups were fab for the most part, particularly the parts in the car Fab work! |
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Jemmz Council Member
Joined: 21 Oct 2006 Posts: 21154 Location: Ultra (DE)
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 5:04 pm Post subject: She Dont Want The World - Jack/Kate/Dean by hellybongo |
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Oh, this was great! Yay for another SPN/Lost crossover! I loved your story. The song was cool too. The Kate/Dean sex scene was edited well! I really like towards the end when Dean is at Kate's hotel room and then Jack storms in and fights him! That was awesome! But the end is really great with Kate coming out and riding off with Dean in the impala. Great work! |
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littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 2:26 am Post subject: |
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I really enjoyed this The slow motion of the clips worked so well with this song. I agree with the colouring/cropping comments that have been made. I find that SPN is a tough one to crossover with because it's shot in such a dark/gray colour where as Lost as more colours. I thought it did drag on in places like in the middle with the reaction shots of jack to kate and vice versa; but I thought the dreams were very well done, loved the hotel scene and the ending was really believable so downloading this song now too btw _________________
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hellybongo Expert Vidder
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Thank you so much for all your comments. You really are very kind.
I know its not brilliant....I don't know how you guys do it. But it makes me smile so thanks for taking the time to watch. I'll take all your great advice and try it on my next one (whenever that might be )
nikkimonique wrote: | I'm a mom of 2 also soon to be 3 ...and I agree its a great sanity saver...haha...how old are your kids?
Keep vidding! I think you're doing great! Make more AUs for sure!! |
I have a 4 year old girl and 2 year old boy. They run me around all day but I love them. Good luck with your impending birth. Hope it all goes well!!!! _________________
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 12:23 pm Post subject: |
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Our kids are really close in age. I have a 5 year old girl and 3 year old boy. _________________
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PsychoCynic Expert Vidder
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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 5:14 pm Post subject: |
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I really liked this! The idea was pretty neat and I really like how you used a song that voiced a story. Your editing was pretty good, I think, (I especially liked Kate/Dean at the bar, Kate kissing Tom/Dean in the car, and then Kate meeting up with Dean at the end.) I would suggest using pan/cropping a tad more to really hide all miscellaneous characters (I could see Anna's face for one part of the sex scene). And be sure to make the clips consistent in size - I saw a few that were widescreen and some that were fullscreen - it normally doesn't bother me except that the coloring borders show and it distracts from the vid itself.
Otherwise, I really like this vid! I can't wait to see the sequels! _________________
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Uruviel Council Member
Joined: 31 Mar 2005 Posts: 21848 Location: Tennessee
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:41 am Post subject: She Dont Want The World - Jack/Kate/Dean by hellybongo |
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Nice crossover! Cool AU stuff and I like the song. |
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