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that was quite cool!  I love the idea of jack and kate crashing on the island  Some of the audio was quite difficult to hear tho. And i guess my main issue was that it moved very quickly and the audio was rushed. So because of that I think the scenes lost some impact. Also, why was James on the chopper at the end if Kate left him behind?  I liked the title cards, but i dont think you needed them. The story was believable enough on its own  I'd like to see part 2 and what happens when they get rescued! oh, and the music was great , especially the suspenseful stuff
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| littleton_pace wrote: | | that was quite cool! I love the idea of jack and kate crashing on the island Some of the audio was quite difficult to hear tho. And i guess my main issue was that it moved very quickly and the audio was rushed. So because of that I think the scenes lost some impact. Also, why was James on the chopper at the end if Kate left him behind? I liked the title cards, but i dont think you needed them. The story was believable enough on its own I'd like to see part 2 and what happens when they get rescued! oh, and the music was great , especially the suspenseful stuff |
Thank you.
My biggest concern was the audio and the editing of the music; and I think my biggest problem is in 'Sony Vegas' it's fine. But I 'publish' it in Windows Movie Maker because if I don't do it that way; Youtube takes forever; and then it doens't work. (It's weird). WMM does weird stuff sometimes.
James was on the chopper because he helped find them. Which I will probably go back to in the sequel.
Thanks for the feedback.I love getting feedback. It helps me a lot. |
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That was cool! I really liked the beginning when they met on the plane and then when it was about to crash and Jack was telling Kate that it was going to be okay. I do agree with Kat that the audio was hard to hear...also the titles were a little too fast I didn't have time to read all of them. But other then that great job! Looking fwd to part 2!!
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| nikkimonique wrote: | | That was cool! I really liked the beginning when they met on the plane and then when it was about to crash and Jack was telling Kate that it was going to be okay. I do agree with Kat that the audio was hard to hear...also the titles were a little too fast I didn't have time to read all of them. But other then that great job! Looking fwd to part 2!! |
Thank you. I am trying to do a lot more with audio now; so this feedback is really helpful. Thanks.
I am going to remove the titles. I don't know why I added them. I think I got onto this idea of 'making a jate trailer' and the titles just stuck.
Your and Kat's imput is really helping me with the sequel. Thank you.
My biggest problem with clips is I fear they run too long sometimes.
TY!
Seson 5 has given me some great Kate/Jack footage. LOL. |
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Well if its an AU and the scene is really important to the storyline I wouldn't worry about length. Just play it by ear see how it feels with the music.
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| nikkimonique wrote: | | Well if its an AU and the scene is really important to the storyline I wouldn't worry about length. Just play it by ear see how it feels with the music. |
Yeah; it's something I should have really thought about; and I am taking that into effect with the sequel; and further story/AU based.
I found that I like more of a story; and direction. |
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