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That was pretty cool! although to be honest; I didn't understand the story very well. I wasn't sure what Sawyer was doing in there; was he a doctor? And did he shoot Jack or did Jack shoot himself? That scene wasn't exactly clear to me. I did love the ending and the Kate parts with Aaron were sweet ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) Did they have two kids or just Aaron? And the Jate scene at the hospital was very nicely done; my fave part ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) _________________
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littleton_pace wrote: | That was pretty cool! although to be honest; I didn't understand the story very well. I wasn't sure what Sawyer was doing in there; was he a doctor? And did he shoot Jack or did Jack shoot himself? That scene wasn't exactly clear to me. I did love the ending and the Kate parts with Aaron were sweet ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) Did they have two kids or just Aaron? And the Jate scene at the hospital was very nicely done; my fave part ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) |
Yeah; Sawyer was a doctor. Unfortunately it was hard to convey that. Yeah they only had the one child; Aaron. And Sawyer shot Jack because he ratted him out to the other doctors. Thank you. |
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MysticWondering wrote: | littleton_pace wrote: | That was pretty cool! although to be honest; I didn't understand the story very well. I wasn't sure what Sawyer was doing in there; was he a doctor? And did he shoot Jack or did Jack shoot himself? That scene wasn't exactly clear to me. I did love the ending and the Kate parts with Aaron were sweet ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) Did they have two kids or just Aaron? And the Jate scene at the hospital was very nicely done; my fave part ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) |
Yeah; Sawyer was a doctor. Unfortunately it was hard to convey that. Yeah they only had the one child; Aaron. And Sawyer shot Jack because he ratted him out to the other doctors. Thank you. |
ahhhh!!! I was confused too but now I get it...and I thought they had two kids as well. B/c she had the little baby when she answered the phone and then Aaron. But I really liked the sequence of this and the reverse scenes and all the dialogue was just great!! I really liked when she called him about Taco night and I agree with Kat that the part in the hospital was my fav too! _________________
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Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 6:09 pm Post subject: Take Me Home (Jate AU) by MysticWondering |
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I thought a lot of your manips and audio were pretty well done! It was an interesting story idea, too. Overall, I think this was a really good AU vid! Very nice! Keep up the awesome work!!! ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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Brooke Expert Vidder
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nikkimonique wrote: | MysticWondering wrote: | littleton_pace wrote: | That was pretty cool! although to be honest; I didn't understand the story very well. I wasn't sure what Sawyer was doing in there; was he a doctor? And did he shoot Jack or did Jack shoot himself? That scene wasn't exactly clear to me. I did love the ending and the Kate parts with Aaron were sweet ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) Did they have two kids or just Aaron? And the Jate scene at the hospital was very nicely done; my fave part ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) |
Yeah; Sawyer was a doctor. Unfortunately it was hard to convey that. Yeah they only had the one child; Aaron. And Sawyer shot Jack because he ratted him out to the other doctors. Thank you. |
ahhhh!!! I was confused too but now I get it...and I thought they had two kids as well. B/c she had the little baby when she answered the phone and then Aaron. But I really liked the sequence of this and the reverse scenes and all the dialogue was just great!! I really liked when she called him about Taco night and I agree with Kat that the part in the hospital was my fav too! |
LOL. I wish I could have conveyed more about Sawyer's role.
Also; with the baby. I tried to look for stuff with Matthew and a baby; but couldn't find anything. So I used Aaron because there was a lot of Kate/Aaron and one Jack/Aaron.
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Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 11:12 pm Post subject: Take Me Home (Jate AU) by MysticWondering |
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Oooooh that was awesome. I totally got the story without reading any of the comments below cause all the manips were so clever. I liked the way you used Sawyer. I don't think I've ever seen an AU where he's been a doctor before, so that was really original. All the manips were awesome aswell. I found the changing music a little distracting though.
Oooh, one more thing - I liked the bits where it went backwards. Twas a cool idea. |
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 1:19 am Post subject: Take Me Home (Jate AU) by MysticWondering |
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I really enjoyed this, I like how you did everything, and good choice of music. I really liked how you did the clips going backwards and how you used sawyer in it. you did a great job! |
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Brooke Expert Vidder
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 3:27 am Post subject: Re: Take Me Home (Jate AU) by MysticWondering |
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186 wrote: | I really enjoyed this, I like how you did everything, and good choice of music. I really liked how you did the clips going backwards and how you used sawyer in it. you did a great job! |
Thank you. I had a blast making it. I wanted to do something with more of a story/plot to it. |
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Brooke Expert Vidder
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 3:31 am Post subject: Re: Take Me Home (Jate AU) by MysticWondering |
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3328 wrote: | Oooooh that was awesome. I totally got the story without reading any of the comments below cause all the manips were so clever. I liked the way you used Sawyer. I don't think I've ever seen an AU where he's been a doctor before, so that was really original. All the manips were awesome aswell. I found the changing music a little distracting though.
Oooh, one more thing - I liked the bits where it went backwards. Twas a cool idea. |
Thank you; it means a lot. I am glad you understood the plot. I was like "I want Sawyer to be the guy who shoots Jack; but why?!" Then I just came to me to put him in the role of Christian. I like changing music for some reason;but I need to figure out how to be more suttle about it and not so abrupt. I had a lot of fun making it. |
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