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		JateFate Advanced Vidder
 
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		nikkimonique Expert Vidder
  
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				ooooo I really liked your storyline of Kate going back to Kevin b/c Jack wasn't there for her. You could tell she wanted to really be with Jack but was settling for Kevin. I like the scene where she is laying on Kevin but thinking of Jack but the lyrics say something about I deserve to be happy or something. That scene and lyric interpretation was realy good. I would have liked to have seen more of that in this video. Some of the scene were a little random with the lyrics and I think the clips ran a little long. I'm all about simplicity in videos...I don't think you need to use a lot of effects  to make a good video, but just try to trim the scenes down a little so the video flows better with the lyrics and the beat.   I hope you dont' mind a little crit. I think this was a really great start! I enjoyed it !   _________________
  
 
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