Lost Video Island

lostzilla · Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 8:22 am Post subject:

Alright then. You have Kate's crime planned out too?
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Hobbes · Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 8:32 am Post subject:

nice! the infection thing is awesome!

"Chapter three: Nate continues to cry" LMAO I should so add that to my signature!

lostzilla · Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 8:35 am Post subject:

hehehe not funny Warren!
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MovieGuy · Advanced Vidder Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022

Actually, it is.

We should photoshop a pic of Nate and have tears runnin down his face.

As for Kate's crime, I've been racking my brain to figure out what she did. Probably won't be a Kate ep til around ep 12.

MovieGuy · Advanced Vidder Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022

It's 5AM and I have to get up at 11, ngiht all. But first, chapter three.

Chapter Three

"Excuse me, ma'm," Liz stopped looking at the plane's window and looked at the flight attendant. "Yes?"
"Would you like something to drink?"
"No, I'm fine." As the woman walked off they hit turbulance.

"I was friggin' drunk!"
"Yeah, right. And she just happened to be a whore like everyone else you've--" Liz looked over her at Nathan and Mary. "Um, excuse me. Could you be quiet?"
"Yes, I will, and so will she hopefully."
"This isn't any of your business so sit back down or I'll sit you down." Liz rolled her and sat back down in her seat. She fastened her seat belt. Suddenly, people flew up into the air. The man she just had spoken too flew up and his head hit her seat.

Before she knew what was gonig on, the back of the plane ripped off. Nathan's body flew out of the plane. "NATHAN!" Mary screamed. Liz tried to look back but a suitcase hit her head.

Nate's body flew through the air toward the ocean. Luckily, the wind picked up and he landed slightly less hard than he should have in the ocean. His body floated toward the island.

Liz woke up, still in her seat. "I wasn't sure which one would be the best," said Boone, who was handing several pens to Jack. "They're all good." Liz was dazed and tried to say something. He left and she unbuckled her seatbelt. She fell over seats and rolled out of the fuselage. She stood up and looked around. She couldn't believe all she saw. She looked over and in horror saw the woman behind her, hung on part of the plane. She could Nathan looking at her body. "You applied pressure didn't you?"

"Yeah, I did," said Nate. Jeff had tweezers in Nate's wound. Liz stared at Nate, thinking about all of what just happened. Jeff pulled out the bullet and put in a pannext to Charlie's. "You'll be fine. Now I want you--" Charlie woke up and started to scream. "Oh, crap!" Liz ran over and grabbed at Charlie. "You guys get out of here!" Jeff and Nate ran out of the tent.

"Charlie! Charlie! Can you hear me?"
"Eliz-- abet--" Charlie slowly blinked.
"Okay, listen, we're gonig to try and help you but--"
"Claire." Charlie fainted. Liz lied him back dow and left the tent.

"What happened?" Nate asked. "He only said one thing," Liz said. "What'd he say?"
"Claire. But the way, he said seemed like he she was in trouble."

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Jack was sewing up Michael's wound. Shannon limped around the side of the cave holding Aaron and stopped. Jack put down the needle and went up to her. "Shannon, are you okay?" Shannon pointed toward the cave where Claire was fainted. As she fell, Jack grabbed Aaron and handed him to Michael. "What?"

Jack walked into the cave and found Claire. "Oh my God." He went over and checked her pulse. He didn't feel it. Finally, he felt it. It was shallow, but she was still alive.

He came up to Michael and said, "I'll finish sewing later." He picked up some tweezers and went back to the cave.

lostzilla · Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 1:05 pm Post subject:

Ok that was good! Where's Anna Lucia btw? LOL
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ebizmybef74 · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Posts: 2641

o snap! Charlie can't die!
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ebizmybef74 · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Posts: 2641

more! more! more! more! more! more! more!

Is that too much of a demand?
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MovieGuy · Advanced Vidder Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022

That's a good demand. Just don't demand not to be killed.

Starting chapter four now.

Harry · Joined: 27 Mar 2005 Posts: 1641

OMG! Im soo far behind this, i still havent read Bombrd

LOL. Ive just been so damn busy

My fanfic and all (which isnt going anywhere). Keep up the good work Colin!

ebizmybef74 · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Posts: 2641

yay!

please please don't kill Liz, Charlie, or Nathan....

What? I didn't say anything.

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MovieGuy · Advanced Vidder Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022

Chapter Four

F O U R H O U R S L A T E R

Nate looked around. He was covering the bullet hole in his leg with his hand. He saw Jeff. There was a bullet in his chest. He was dead. He looked past the tress on fire and tried to find Liz. He saw her. It looked like her face was covered in blood. Nate grabbed at the sand and started to drag himself toward her.

He stopped when he saw Charlie standing there. Hopefully Charlie did not see him. Charlie ran toward the people screaming and running in different directions.

Nate tried to puul himself but couldn't. Ana Lucia came out the bushes and fell down next to him. "Nathan? Are you okay?"
"Yeah, I'm fine. You?"
"Shot in the shoulder. Where's Liz?" Nate pointed at her. "I'll see if she's okay." Ana Lucia stood up and walked over to her. She fell down and checked her pulse. She looked toward Nathan. She yelled to Nathan, "She's dead!"

Nathan stared blankly at Ana Lucia.

His girlfirend was hanging, dead in her seat, on a piece of rubble.

Nate tried to stand up but Charlie grabbed and turned him over. He pointed the gun directly at Nate's head.

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Kate ran back to the ladder. Her arm was still bleeding. She tried to step onto the ladder but the rungsstarted to break. Before she knew what was happening, the ladder fell down around her. "Hurley! Throw down the rope"

Hurley ran over and grabbed for the rope. He picked it pu but Cynthia's arm was tangling in it. He screamed and tried to get it loose.

Kate looked down the hall. Locke was walking towards her, the bloody knife was still in his hand. "Hurley!"

"Hold on!" Kate started screaming as soon as he got the arm loose. He threw in the rope, but her screams stopped. "Kate? Kate?"

Hurley looked down the hole. He picked up the end of the rope and tied it to a log. "I can't believe I'm doing this." Hurley grabbed the rope and started to climb down.

It was really tight ffor Hurley but he kept going. After several minutes, he got to the bottom. He stepped onto the bamboo sticks and looked around. A giant streak of blood went down the tunnel. "No way." Hurley started to walk down the tunnel.

Yes, confusing. Will go back a few hours in the next chapter to find out what's going on.

Hobbes · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 9:49 am Post subject:

LMAO you don't see the show speeding up time just to confuse poor viewers!

MovieGuy · Advanced Vidder Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022

There's a difference between viewers and readers. And this is my trademark. In the past few eps, I've had it go back a few hours so I thought it would be nice to screw you guys up by goin ahead.

Chapt five and probably six tomorrow

lostzilla · Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 10:17 am Post subject:

Nate's gonna kick Charlie ass.

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