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LOST Season 2 - BtVSfreak FanFic
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Harry



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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 8:29 pm    Post subject: LOST Season 2 - BtVSfreak FanFic Reply with quote

Hey guys, I was bored and I love writing and always wanted to write a fanfic but never got around to it but ya know wat, i actually did some. I have a "temporary" site up for now for it and it has one ep on it so far (well what I have done) and i was wondering if i could get some feedback on it

Click here for my fanfic

1. Gone To Far (Aired)
2. Truth (Aired)
3. TBA (Re-scheduled)


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MovieGuy
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 8:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just read the first chpater. That was great. I'm so used to my version of the story.

Freaky with Shannon telling Sayid she saw him die.

My only complaint is that Michael gave up walt too quickly, but in mine he gave up too. Awseome Awesom fic. Keep it up.


Hopefully people will start deamnding you to do things like they do me. I'm serious.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

LMAO Thx.... Well Michael.. Walt,gone..... Sawyer injured... ???????????
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Awesome first chapter Harry. Hurley being taken by the monster thingy and Shannon telling Sayid she knew Boone was going to die and that Sayid's going to die also. Claire finding out about Charlie's little secret. WOW!!!

l love it Harry. MUST WRITE MORE SOON.

edit: l just read more Harry and OMFG!!!
You killed off Hurley.

Walt was alone, tied up on a chair. He couldn’t see anything, too dark. “Let me go!” He shouted this many times, over and over. No one could hear him, except the others. After an hour or so, someone finally opened up a door and walked in. “Let me go!”
“Listen kid,” a woman said, sounded sort of young. “You’re special. You know you are. You’re the reason why everyone else is here. We brought you here. He have a friend here for you also,” she walked out of the room, ignoring the little boy’s screams. When she walked out, the door closed and then reopened about ten minutes later, revealing a large man.
“Hurley!” Walt screamed. Hurley was bleeding everywhere, scrapes all over. He just fell down to the ground and didn’t move. He was dead.


Again...OMFG!!!~Poor Hurley.
l love all the Sawyer flashbacks too. Great job Harry. Now go write some more.
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Harry



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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you Holly Wonka ..... This ep should be done tonight and I will start working on the next ep. It might take awhile though because i have exams Wed-Fri & Mon ...... soo ill be busy but not too busy im glad u guys liked it

BTW - once i get this ep done, ill be posting it over at LF and be putting up a link on that site.

Also- anyone like the pic for the ep? LMAO
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 1:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just wondering how long till a character named Nathan show up??LOL
Awesome job Harry. More More
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Harry



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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 1:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I dunno if im going to add ppl from the forums on here... Ill end up like MovieGuy... killin em off... bringing em back....
LOL- Thx for all the complements. The whole first ep is finished and im currently working on ep 2 (Truth) YAY!
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 1:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

LOL I was just playing.
No need to bring more people in. It's awesome the way it is.[/list]
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Harry



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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 1:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Spoilers/Preview up on page 3 of ep 1 for Truth. Hope you guys like what I have in store for the next couple eps
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, I madeup the character of Nathan BEFORE I remember that was Nate's name.

I love the picture you put up for it. Her's what sucks though: Hurley's dead! Man, still awesome though.

I should put a little teaser for the next episode at the end of "Bombed" like you did.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks good Harry.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sawyer's not dead. He can't be dead.
l wanna know who the old man is? ls he that old guy that took Walt in the finale? Come on Harry, l need answers. LOL.

Next time on Lost....
“Hurley, you’re alive!”
“Sayid! Where the hell is Sayid?”
“Danielle was spotted talking to a girl in the bushes over there last night. What are we going to do about that?”
“Kate! Kate!”

Sounds awesome Harry. l can't wait to read it.
Your doing such an awesome job btw. WooHoo!!!
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

YAY! its a success! Pic for ep 2 is up now
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looking forward to episode 2.

I wish my fic was a success.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

MovieGuy wrote:
I wish my fic was a success.


Urs is a huge success! I love urs! Ur the one who inspired me to make my own

BTW - Just added a Tag Board onto the site, feel free to post comments there also
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