nikkimonique
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That was too cute Eryn! I really enjoyed it! I've always loved this song and its perfect for Claire and Charlie. Your lyric interpretation was very good! the only bit of crit. I have for you is that I thought all the different transitions were a little distracting, I think something more subtle would have been better for the tone of this vid. Still great work though! 
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SassyLostie2
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| Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 2:19 am Post subject: |
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Aww, I thought it was cute, Eryn. There were a few little editing things that bothered me. Such as, the different transitions - especially before a line ended (try not to stuff a bunch of clips into one line unless it goes with the beat, and then try to transition is smoothly if you can), making things a little confusing and some of the clips didn't seem to match perfectly, but it's really not a huge deal. Just something to work on.  You have talent, and I can't wait to see more from you. It's a great song for PB&J and it was very sweet. Keep vidding. This was adorable.  OH yeah! I almost forgot. I have to say that the last verse (I've been asleep for a while now) and chorus were my faves. Good clips and just all around...hmm...what's another word for cute, adorable, or sweet? You get the picture. Nice job!
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Jemmz
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| Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 2:14 pm Post subject: Wherever You Go by HobbitRockGod |
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| Yeah, I agree-very adorable and sweet Great job, Eryn. I didn't find the transitions too distracting but it might be better to keep the different ones to a minimal. Like the page turning one, you could just use that one and a couple others but it didn't matter too much. I really liked this Always nice to see a cute PB&J vid |
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