littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 10:22 am Post subject: |
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cool idea. i love AU ships (like kate and nick from csi, lol) and this was really cool. ive never even thought of these two but you made it believable that they were having issues. i would have used a little more beat use cos it would've kept me watching, i sorta lost interest through the middle. but it was a strong start. and i loved the parts of jack seeing her in the window of the plane good work. _________________
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