KajaM
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Joined: 28 Jun 2005
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 Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:34 am Post subject: |
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That was a very cool AU vid! I enjoyed it a lot! The moments were Juliet and Kate are jealous because of Sawyer/Jack are really well edited and look quite convincing and I loved the ending.
May I make a little suggestion though? (Only constructive cristicism, of course, since I loved your vid!  ):
At the beginning of the vid, when Juliet and Kate are trying to escape, you could have used some clips of any of the Others like Danny following them or kinda "hunting" them. We see moments were they are running away or falling down, were they are scared but we don't see why that is so. Of course, we can all put two and two together and we understand why they are in a panic, but it would've been very neat to actually see it. It also would've given the vid a bit more action.
I really enjoyed this vid though. Great work!
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