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Athena Alexandria Expert Vidder
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Jemmz Council Member
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:19 pm Post subject: Gone Away (Jack/Brennan/Booth) by Athena Alexandria |
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This was beautiful, Samara!! You totally sold the story - your manips were so believable! Gorgeous job |
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Captain Freya Expert Vidder
Joined: 31 Jul 2007 Posts: 5298 Location: Scranton, Pennsylvania ;)
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 6:29 pm Post subject: Gone Away (Jack/Brennan/Booth) by Athena Alexandria |
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Loooooove it!! Soo, my favourite parts: Love the whole opening bit, with Booth eating the fancy schmancy dinner she made for Jack. I like little domesticated Brennan And I felt kinda sorry for Jack, when he left her his needy little voicemail, and she was off, drinking and gallivanting about. I really bought into the scene where they caught each other's eyes at the lecture thing. The scenes just matched up so well, and the looks of both their faces were just perfect. Also, yay for a happy ending! The end made me smile |
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namaste nikki Expert Vidder
Joined: 17 May 2010 Posts: 919 Location: California
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 9:39 pm Post subject: Gone Away (Jack/Brennan/Booth) by Athena Alexandria |
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YES a happy ending!!! I love this. Everything fit so well. This was so great, I love how you can tell your stories so clearly... Plus BONES rocks!!!!! |
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
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Oh wow! Great story Sam! I was really entertained by this! It was so fun!
Poor Brennan with her work-aholic husband. You kind of can't blame her. The beginning was cool with him working really late and Brennan having Booth over. I loved that manip when she comes in the bathroom and yells at him about not calling about being late. I can so relate to that scene from personal experience. I love that scene when Jack sees her giving a lecture. I started to feel sorry for him then... but I loved the ending! _________________
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Brooke Expert Vidder
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 1:12 am Post subject: Gone Away (Jack/Brennan/Booth) by Athena Alexandria |
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This is really well done. The manips/the audio manips were just great. I really liked this. The only thing I didn't buy was when Brennan said "We fought all the time and don't like each other". I too loved the bathroom scene, and I loved seeing her get ready, the time being shown and where he's at. |
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Uruviel Council Member
Joined: 31 Mar 2005 Posts: 21848 Location: Tennessee
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Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 5:51 am Post subject: Gone Away (Jack/Brennan/Booth) by Athena Alexandria |
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Cool storyline & great manips! |
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