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Joined: 16 May 2005 Posts: 10110
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Aislynn Council Member
Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Posts: 35782 Location: Sawyerville, USA
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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I loved how it really seemed like Claire was telling this story to Aaron (and how she was getting more upset and emotional as it went along!). And I loved Charlie fading out of the pic like that at the end!
A really beautiful and moving vid! |
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AlcoholicPixie Expert Vidder
Joined: 07 Apr 2006 Posts: 1085 Location: Sudbury, UK
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 8:04 pm Post subject: |
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OK, first things first, I watched your AU Jate vids, and I have to say that I was absolutely mesmerised as I watched them. Your editing was practically flawless, and even the words themselves moved me.
So this time around I was expecting something pretty special. And by Joe did I get it! I'm not a huge PB&J watcher, but I loved the idea itself, and that's what made me click.
Your use of the music was fantastic, and I really liked the fact that you made use of transitions, but you didn't go overboard, which suited the mood of the video and the song. I also very much liked the use of black-and-white for some of the clips, and the audio voiceover in the middle was especially good, like just telling the story to Aaron was bringing back all sorts of half-forgotten moments for Claire. I also agree with the previous comment; Charlie fading out at the end seemed to be almost like closure for Claire - like just telling Aaron the story seemed to help.
All in all, an excellent vid, and I'll be personally appealing to the council if it doesn't get awarded a CP! |
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cylune Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 May 2006 Posts: 2715 Location: Québec, Canada (icon by imaginary lives)
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 9:16 pm Post subject: |
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Very nicely done! I love how it got more intense as the story advanced. And Charlie dispearing at the end made me really sad... Great special effects! _________________
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LOST_Fanatic Novice Vidder
Joined: 02 Feb 2005 Posts: 95 Location: If I knew I wouldn't be lost.
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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That was a great video. Love the idea of Claire telling Aaron about Charlie and your use of transitions and effects gave the video and song even more emotion. _________________
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Spiral Static Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 02 Apr 2006 Posts: 404
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 9:46 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome video. I loved the beat use, especially on the choruses. And I loved how you had Claire telling the story to Aaron.
Great Job. |
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Borislava Expert Vidder
Joined: 01 Jun 2006 Posts: 1240
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Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 7:50 am Post subject: |
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Aislynn,you're awesome vidder and i'm glad everytime i see your comments on my videos.Thank you
LOST_Fanatic,It was difficult to follow the chorus because they're so moving and intence that you have to find the right scenes...i'm glad you like it
cylune,thank you so much!I'm a big fan of your videos especially "Two words" and "Precious"!
AlcoholicPixie,I've never recieved such a big comment.Thank you very much...i really enjoy making this one even though it's my first PB&J video ever...so it was hard but hopefully i've done it
Spiral Static,glad you liked it The idea of Chaire telling the story to Aaron come into my mind after telling a story to brother myself...so i look for a proper scenes and here it is _________________ It’s been a long year
Since we last spoke
How’s your halo?
Just between you and I
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For blue, blue skies
I’ll forgive you |
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AlcoholicPixie Expert Vidder
Joined: 07 Apr 2006 Posts: 1085 Location: Sudbury, UK
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Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 8:04 am Post subject: |
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No problem! I prefer to write detailed comments now because I find that receiving detailed comments on my own videos really helps me see where I'm going wrong and what I can improve upon, so I like to do this for other vidders as well. |
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Borislava Expert Vidder
Joined: 01 Jun 2006 Posts: 1240
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 9:16 pm Post subject: |
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Yes, the detailed comments are really very usefull.You can deffinitely improve your work when you see your mistakes _________________ It’s been a long year
Since we last spoke
How’s your halo?
Just between you and I
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For blue, blue skies
I’ll forgive you |
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phoenix39 Novice Vidder
Joined: 04 Mar 2005 Posts: 479
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Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 6:54 pm Post subject: |
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Great vid! I loved the beautiful way you had Claire tell Aaron the story or her and Charlie. _________________ -Jane |
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