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Joined: 16 May 2005 Posts: 10111
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Posted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 6:58 pm Post subject: "she moves in her own way" by oceanicflight |
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"she moves in her own way" 06-12-2006
my 1st vid aint very good but please tell me what you think!
Song: she moves in her own way by the kooks
Vidder: oceanicflight
Length: 2.52 (10.1 WMv)
Link: http://media.putfile.com/jack-and-kate---lost
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tacoshack27 Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 08 Jun 2006 Posts: 36 Location: Canada
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Posted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 9:52 pm Post subject: |
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That wasn't bad at all, I enjoyed that nice Kate and Jack story. Only thing you need to work on is tighten up your editing. The editing was a little off in the beginning but it got a lot better about a minute or so into it. Good work, keep it up.
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Yakka84
Joined: 04 May 2006 Posts: 22
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Posted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 10:09 pm Post subject: Hey |
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Really liked it! I want u to bear in mind my comments come only from the watching side of this site - I have never made a video, but watched most of them! What I liked about ur vid is the choice of clips...you picked a good range and didn't focus on just one episode which lots of people sometimes do...the clips you picked were some of my faveroites too! One thing I would say, just from a personal level, is that my absolute fave vids are ones that tell a really clear story - a journey, and with a perfect song to match, that works with the story (not that I ask a lot!lol!) - just somethings I thought I'd mention! hope it helps!
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rbexter93 Expert Vidder

Joined: 24 Mar 2006 Posts: 3270
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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 6:16 am Post subject: |
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you stole my song!! (lol it's okay) well any way mostly great editing but remember to use it throughout otherwise a good solid attempt _________________
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oceanicflight Novice Vidder
Joined: 11 Jun 2006 Posts: 28
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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 6:41 pm Post subject: |
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sorry i was pretty sure nobody else had used that song! very sorry! thanks for the comments i shall bear that in mind when making my next video! xXx |
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rbexter93 Expert Vidder

Joined: 24 Mar 2006 Posts: 3270
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:42 pm Post subject: |
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no I mean I was working on a video with that song, the kooks rock! Not your fault you have a good taste in music 0h and loved the bit when it said "Cause I'm a better man moving on to better things" and you used the I'm sorry scene! _________________
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oceanicflight Novice Vidder
Joined: 11 Jun 2006 Posts: 28
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 9:10 pm Post subject: |
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lol nice 1! the kooks are the best! yeah thats my genious mind lol onli jokin. wel because we are so alike i think i will do black and white by the upper room as my next video lol! xXx |
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Karowyn Expert Vidder

Joined: 06 Mar 2006 Posts: 344 Location: England
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 7:13 am Post subject: |
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probably the best jate vid that i've seen in a while! Well Done!  |
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sam4
Joined: 09 Jan 2006 Posts: 30
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Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2006 9:43 am Post subject: |
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hey i was wondering if you could put the song to download or the video |
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oceanicflight Novice Vidder
Joined: 11 Jun 2006 Posts: 28
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 4:34 pm Post subject: |
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i would but i'm not sure how sorry |
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Redhead Expert Vidder

Joined: 24 Dec 2005 Posts: 96 Location: Here.
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 6:35 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome song! Really good vid too, especially as it was your first, mine was a choppy frankenstein mess but yours was nicely edited and it ended on a kiss!  |
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rbexter93 Expert Vidder

Joined: 24 Mar 2006 Posts: 3270
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 7:33 am Post subject: |
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oh and never say It's not very good in your video description! Be confident. To rephrase "My first video, a jate one. I appriciate your comments to make it better" Never sell yourself short _________________
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oceanicflight Novice Vidder
Joined: 11 Jun 2006 Posts: 28
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 12:17 pm Post subject: |
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ok thnx 4 da advice! |
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Giuly Intermediate Vidder

Joined: 06 Jul 2006 Posts: 85
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Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 12:48 pm Post subject: |
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Your first video is very nice! Go on!  _________________
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