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Brooke Expert Vidder
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littleton_pace Council Member
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 4:09 am Post subject: |
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Ooh that was really great Brooke! the story is really intruging, both Brooke and Jack having their own medical issues. that bitchy chick at the end "now you'll have that time apart you wished for." ouch! some of the audio was a little hard to hear over the lyrics but i got that you were going for, great audio manips in there, i loved the ones of poor brooke being pissed that jack had told about her infertility to that girl, although she was a bit random. would have liked to see more of her with Jack to gauge their friendship
cant wait for more _________________
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Uruviel Council Member
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 5:47 am Post subject: The Fog At The End of The Tunnel by Brooke |
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Wow, that was such a good story, Brooke! |
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Brooke Expert Vidder
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 2:12 pm Post subject: The Fog At The End of The Tunnel by Brooke |
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Yes, she was a bit random and it might have to do with the fact that I can't stand her on the show. I'm going to have a sequel to explain more.
I loved that line "Now you'll have that time apart you wished for." She can be heartless.
Thanks Kat and Heather. I had a lot of fun with this story. |
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namaste nikki Expert Vidder
Joined: 17 May 2010 Posts: 919 Location: California
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Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2011 6:39 pm Post subject: The Fog At The End of The Tunnel by Brooke |
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I really liked this story line. The end with the girl WOW, that was a great line.....Great Job!!! |
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Brooke Expert Vidder
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Posted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:55 am Post subject: The Fog At The End of The Tunnel by Brooke |
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Thanks Nikki!! LOL She was kind of bitchy wasn't she? I'm doing a sequel; probably a few; angsty Brooke/Jack vids. |
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Aislynn Council Member
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 4:52 am Post subject: |
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Oh wow, that ending line really cut to the bone!
Anyway, great story, I was really engrossed in finding out what was going to happen! I enjoyed it a bunch! |
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Brooke Expert Vidder
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 8:43 am Post subject: The Fog At The End of The Tunnel by Brooke |
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Thanks Ais!!! Yes, I loved that ending. It really does pack a big punch. I'm going to do a few more; make it a small series. |
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ciaimpala Expert Vidder
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 9:34 pm Post subject: The Fog At The End of The Tunnel by Brooke |
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Really well-manipped storyline!!! Looking forward to seeing what happens next! |
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Brooke Expert Vidder
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Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:14 am Post subject: The Fog At The End of The Tunnel by Brooke |
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Thanks Becac. |
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Jemmz Council Member
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:31 pm Post subject: The Fog At The End of The Tunnel by Brooke |
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Another fantastic AU!! I agree, VERY well manipped And excellent storyline once again. I really enjoyed this Fab job! |
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Brooke Expert Vidder
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 6:23 am Post subject: The Fog At The End of The Tunnel by Brooke |
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Thanks, Jemma. I am glad to hear about the manips. Thanks again. |
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