littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
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Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2010 7:28 am Post subject: |
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hey, welcome to LVI!
This was a pretty good first vid; the editing itself was quite strong in places, although I don't think the audio was needed under every clip especially when it was hard to hear like when Tom and Kate uncovered the treasure box. I also didn't really get the story here, with a song like Unfaithful which is quite specific in it's theme it would need more conveying through the clips. Like Kate cheated with Sawyer, but why? Or was she cheating on both because she sees Connor at the start? I did like the literal symbolism of her not wanting to hurt Tom and be a 'murderer' and then she did kill him in the end; but the actual story needed a lot more fleshing out
Keep at it; though It's definitely better than my first vid! _________________
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