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Im1oftheOceanic6 Expert Vidder

Joined: 23 Jun 2008 Posts: 3705
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:26 pm Post subject: "Jate-Youre Beautiful AU" by Im1oftheOceanic6 |
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"Jate-Youre Beautiful AU" 12-30-2009
After the reset Jack remembers Kate but she does not know him.Jack keeps seeing Kate.When he sees her for the final time he realizes she is happy and has moved on.
Song: Youre Beautiful by James Blunt
Vidder: Im1oftheOceanic6
Length: 3:34 (23.8MB WMV)
Warning: Contains Mature Themes
Link(s): http://www.mediafire.com/?nitmmgwymoq
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4pVCsTS_6TA
Last edited by Im1oftheOceanic6 on Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:14 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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littleton_pace Council Member

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:27 pm Post subject: |
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ooh, really nice vid!!  great idea for an AU
I really loved how you used the beats and the v/o at the start, really beautiful  excellent lyric interp too at the start with Jack seeing Kate with Sawyer at the airport. and then kate seeing Jack "fu*king high". my fave manip was the one where Jack calls her and you used the scene of the phone listing 'unknown caller'. that really helped your story along  I wasn't very clear on the ending tho because Aaron sort of came out of nowhere. Was he meant to be Kate and Sawyer's son? Or was it just meant to show that she had moved on?
May I suggest that you don't tell the ending of the story in the summary? it's more fun to find out while watching what's going to happen And if the story-telling in the video is strong, you shouldnt have to spell it out   _________________
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Im1oftheOceanic6 Expert Vidder

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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:51 pm Post subject: Jate-Youre Beautiful AU by Im1oftheOceanic6 |
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Aaron was meant to be Sawyer and Kate's child.
Thanks for the advice,I'll try to watch my descriptions and not spoil the endings. |
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Aislynn Council Member
Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Posts: 35782 Location: Sawyerville, USA
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:46 pm Post subject: |
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That was a really great song choice for this story, it just worked so well, in my opinion! That was a really nice "after the reset" take on things! I also loved your clip choices, particularly near the start when Jack saw Kate and Sawyer at the airport! I enjoyed it!  |
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