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cagedfreedom Expert Vidder
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Uruviel Council Member
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:25 am Post subject: The Space Between [PB&J AU] by cagedfreedom |
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Lovely! So sad! Love the beginning, and the audio at the end is great! |
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littleton_pace Council Member
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:34 am Post subject: |
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oooh; very original idea Rosie!! i love the car crash idea! it worked really well with Claire shaking Charlie's body loved the audio just after the crash of 'Charlie?' very cool. and the hospital scenes were great! I loved the on island stuff and the fact that it was Charlie's dream. loved that "Claire...where are we?" bit in there that was very cool and very well pulled off and his realization that he was going to die and leave her behind; almost preparing her very very cool! _________________
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cappy Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:46 am Post subject: The Space Between [PB&J AU] by cagedfreedom |
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Very original. This AU verse was so haunting and elegant.
Great manipulation of clips and audio to tell a new story. |
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aradnea Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 2:58 pm Post subject: The Space Between [PB&J AU] by cagedfreedom |
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I love it. This idea is so fantastic. It kind of reminded me of the 'Enternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind'. I love how Charlie tells Claire that he's going to die and when they say goodbye and he disappears. It was sad and beautiful. Great work, Rosie! |
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cagedfreedom Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:36 pm Post subject: |
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I've seen some of you do this and felt I should thank each of you xD
Uruviel - Thanks Heather! I'm glad you liked it
littleton_pace - Thanks Kat I wanted to have it as if he was saying goodbye properly (preparing her) so I'm pleased you picked up on that! I'm glad you liked the AU!
cappy - someone at YT said they found it quite spooky as well so I'm happy its got that theme, thanks for watching!
aradnea - oooo I love 'Eternal Sunshine..', hehe glad it gave that impression. Thanks Alicja!! I think people call you Ali? But wasn't sure! xD _________________
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Belxf Expert Vidder
Joined: 26 Mar 2006 Posts: 3267 Location: Rio!
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:47 pm Post subject: The Space Between [PB&J AU] by cagedfreedom |
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Beautiful vid!
Loved the storyline... Great idea, really original and soooo sad!! The audio was perfect! I loved the "where are we, Claire?", and the part where he tells her he's going to die...But my favorite part was when they kissed, we heard that beep that means the person died and they smiled! So sad and beautiful!
Awesome vid! |
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cagedfreedom Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 8:03 pm Post subject: |
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Omg thanks bel! Im pleased you watched my vid as I love yours alot!! xD
I'm happy the ending with the smiles was good as I didnt want it to be too angsty Thanks for your comment!! _________________
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Jemmz Council Member
Joined: 21 Oct 2006 Posts: 21154 Location: Ultra (DE)
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 8:51 pm Post subject: |
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WOW! I love this! So original I agree, it was very elegent and gentle. Beautiful! The manips were great, I think above all the audio was the best. The "where are we?" bit was really good. And I love the "I'm gonna die, Claire"! The manipulated speech worked really well, especially at the end! The end was GORGEOUS with the kiss and he disappears and then the flat line noise comes on-wow! And the speech there worked wonderfully. "Don't give up, I love you. See you soon" I loved it, really awesome work Rosie!! |
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cagedfreedom Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:24 pm Post subject: |
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awww thanks so much Jemmz!! Im glad you liked the audio at the ending i wasnt sure if that was going to be corny or whatever but im SO pleased that its got a positive response!
thank you!! _________________
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tjmack1986 Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:30 pm Post subject: The Space Between [PB&J AU] by cagedfreedom |
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That was amazing! Very sad, but amazing none the less. I loved it, definitely a fav PB&J video. |
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cagedfreedom Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:36 pm Post subject: |
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thanks so much tammy! im glad u liked it! _________________
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loudpaw Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 3:34 am Post subject: The Space Between [PB&J AU] by cagedfreedom |
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the beginning and the part when he tells Claire he's gunna die are my fave parts |
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cagedfreedom Expert Vidder
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thank you!!! _________________
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 1:20 pm Post subject: |
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That was so beautiful and romantic. I loved the storyline! It was so sad at the end when he said he had to go after they kissed and he disappeared. I almost cried. Awesome job on this one! _________________
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