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"Bad Dream" by Shell

 
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Shell
Intermediate Vidder


Joined: 27 Dec 2007
Posts: 13
PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 3:04 am    Post subject: "Bad Dream" by Shell Reply with quote
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"Bad Dream" 05-27-2008
Charlie, Claire video
Song: Bad Dream by Keane
Vidder: Shell
Length: 4:00 (53.6MB WMV)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8hbICbhHejI
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8hbICbhHejI
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littleton_pace
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Joined: 16 Nov 2006
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PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 9:33 am    Post subject: Bad Dream by Shell Reply with quote
You've got some really promising work here; I was really drawn in to keep watching and thats one of the main elements of vidding. Beautiful song too. You had some beat use; in the future I would suggest perhaps adding some more. Also; I would cut down on the scenes, perhaps not hang onto them longer than about 4 seconds; it keeps the vid moving and the watcher watching. I really liked the part where Claire woke up and Charlie had the baby; very clever idea switching it! i really liked the end too with the shots of them being a family together You did a very good job with this
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