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Ally Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 13 Jun 2005 Posts: 2355 Location: Austr(al)ia
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 4:22 pm Post subject: the story about the giant spider and the men eating tree |
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so I'll write something here too
and the hole thing also started after Exodus 3
Chappy 1
Lost.Lost to the world. Lost on a bloody island. Lost inside.
It was 44 days since she had seen anyhing that she was used to.
Her life wasn't that bad, not bad enough to think about end this live and start a new one, like this.
Sure it wasn't bad on this island, expect the monster, the others, a crazy frensh chick, death everywhere... alright, maybe it WAS that bad.
But she couldn't change her position, so the only thing he could do was starrnig at the see.
" You worry about them?" a male voice said from behind her.
She ignored it first, till she started to nod.
" Yeah, a bit.. but I think they'll make it.. don't they?" but her voice wasn't really full of hope. " I guess" the man behind her answered and sat down besider her.
" Danielle is gone. " he told her. She liked his voice, it calmed her down. It was his job to calm people down and o stay calm himself.
" I think this is bad or?" she asked and turned her face from the ocean into his direction.
" I hope not... but there is stilll smoke.... maybe it was her who started he fire... but we can*t be sure of that" he said and stood up.
" Don't stay out here to long" he said and walked off.
Something was wrong, something was really wrong and she knew but she couldn't tell what
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alright it was crap, anyway >> _________________ I don't discuss to find the truth I discuss to have a voice
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lostzilla Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:19 pm Post subject: |
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That was pretty good actually Ally, you should write more. _________________
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Ally Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:22 pm Post subject: |
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thanks but it is to serious >> I wanted to make something funny! but I donT want to write silly crap _________________ I don't discuss to find the truth I discuss to have a voice
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Ally Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 13 Jun 2005 Posts: 2355 Location: Austr(al)ia
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:38 pm Post subject: |
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CHAPPY two - the men-eating tree
Kate stood up and tred to get the sand off her clothes.
she wanted to follow Jack, when she suddelny heared someone caling her name.
She turned around and saw Nathan near the wood.
" What's up?" she asked and walked over to him " Anything's wrong?" she asked him.
" no, I just wantd to talk a bit." he smiled. It was no secet the he thought tha she was a real hottie.
" Oh.. sure" she said and raised an eyebrow.
" You want to walk a bit?" he asked whereon she nodded.
It was a silent evening, an evening that was a bit TOO silent.
Out of nowhere the earth started to shake and the lefes arround them shook wildly.
" What the hel is going on?" Kate shouted out load and tried to figure out where this all came from when a tree took Nathan.
Kate was in panic and tried to catch his leg, but the tree was to strong, so that she couldnt do anything. _________________ I don't discuss to find the truth I discuss to have a voice
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lostzilla Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:52 pm Post subject: |
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So I got eaten by a tree. Now that's a fan fic. Take that Potter! _________________
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Ally Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:53 pm Post subject: |
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I thought it would be the best to kill you now, so you won't come with " Don't kill me" XD _________________ I don't discuss to find the truth I discuss to have a voice
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 6:31 pm Post subject: |
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LOL That's great.
He won't be saying "don't kill me" when I stop the killings after episode seven. |
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Ally Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 6:32 pm Post subject: |
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true
hmm maybe I let him live to rescue me when the gat spider wants to eat me, so that he gets eaten by the spider Oo hmmm _________________ I don't discuss to find the truth I discuss to have a voice
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 6:37 pm Post subject: |
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Ally wrote: | true
hmm maybe I let him live to rescue me when the gat spider wants to eat me, so that he gets eaten by the spider Oo hmmm |
Then the spider throws him up and then the spider and the tree rip him in half and it could be some sort of story about sharing.
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Ally Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 6:39 pm Post subject: |
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yeah that would be very nice!!!! ^o^
btw you have MSN? _________________ I don't discuss to find the truth I discuss to have a voice
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Ally Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 7:50 pm Post subject: |
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_________________ I don't discuss to find the truth I discuss to have a voice
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 8:20 pm Post subject: |
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LOL |
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Ally Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 12:28 pm Post subject: |
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CHAPPY 3- a story about clones and giant spiders
Kate headed back to the camp, filled with confusion.
When she got there she ran to Jack.
" Jack" she cried, " Nathan, he, he was eaten . by.. by a tree"
First he looked at her shocked when he saw Nathan seeting by the water.
" Kate Kate calm down.. see, there he is." he said to her.
"W-what?? Nathan! You're alive! Thank god you'e alive" she said.
" Sure thing, I shouldn't I?" He asked her puzzled.
" I saw you! A tree ate you !!"
" . i think you .. maybe had something like a daydream or so?" he asked and raised an eyebrow.
" No! no I'm not crazy, I'm not crazy!!" she shouted at him and ran off.
She exited the cave and ran into the jungle.
" Holly crap" Nathan said and ran after her, but he lost her trace and got out of the jungle on the beach.
" Nate! What are you doing out here?" Ally asked him after he came out beside her.
" Oh I was searching for Kate" he told her and started to check her out .
" She's not here, I didn't see her the whole day. You wanna come with me, backto the caves? " she asked him.
" 'Kay I don't think that I'll find her, maybe Locke should search for her."
he nodded and started to walk back with her to the caves.
he way wasn't to long, but after a while Ally felt annoyed.
" Stop checking me o..o.. AH!!!!!" a giant spider came out of the bushes and snatched at him. He tried to escape, but it was to late, the giant spider ripped his head of.
She started to eat, and also the trees started to take some parts of his body
- and the moral of the story is, monster share their food, like sould share with the 3. world - _________________ I don't discuss to find the truth I discuss to have a voice
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fallen_angel Advanced Vidder
Joined: 20 Feb 2005 Posts: 4376 Location: Australia
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 12:32 pm Post subject: |
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LMAO... you just can't go wrong with a story with giant spiders and clones..... loved it _________________ Pirates 3 - MAY 25th 2007!!! |
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 12:34 pm Post subject: |
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LMFAO " Stop checking me o..o.. AH!!!!!"
Glad you went with the moral of the story. |
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