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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 4:38 am Post subject: |
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Sorry it wasn't up last nite, got distracted with my dog's leg dislocating or something.
Chapter Five
Nathan was sitting by the campfire. "Sayid, I'm on it, Sayid." Charlie ran by Nathan. Nathan stood up and started to walk toward the jungle. Mary was still hanging there.
He walked up to the trees and sat down. Sudden;y, a strange roar bellows from the jungle. He could see tress falling to the ground ahead of him. He stood and started to wlak into the jungle. "Okay."
Liz was looking at both of Charlie's eyes. He wasn't wearing his shirt anymore, since it was shredded up and used for bandages. "Do you have any idea where we go, Nathan?"
"Nate. Call me Nate."
"Okay, Nate. Where do you think we go?"
"Um, let's go that way."
They both lifted Charlie's body and pulled him along as they headed into the dark jungle. It was not 8:15PM and they had been gpne from the caves for several hours, but no one had even thought of looking for them.
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Shannon finally pulled another rock out of the entrance. When the bomb exploded, there had been a cave-in at the cave that they were changing Aaron in. Thy could see light, but none of the holes were big enough for them to get through. Shannon sat down to take a break. "How long till we get out of here?" asked Claire. "I don't know. Someone has to have noticed by now there was a cave-in."
"I wonder what caused it."
Suddenly, a shadow covered some of the holes. Suddenly, a gun poked one of the holes. "Get down!" yelled Shannon as the gun shot off. They might jumped to the ground and blood hit the wall.
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Nathan and Liz were dragging Charlie through the jungle. "So, Liz?"
"Yeah?"
"You seeing anyone?" Nate said jokingly. Liz stopped and looked at him. Instead of scoffing at him like Kate did earlier that day, she said "Maybe, why do you ask?"
"Just wondering." Nate stopped as he heard someone. He could hear a faint hello in the distance. "Did you hear that?"
"Yeah, I did." They started dragging Charlie's body toward the voice.
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Locke was at the end of the tunnel. He had been walkeding for hours and and was at the end. He didn't see anything. Except for a rock in the corner.
He bent over and tried to pick i up. It was attached to the floor. He pulled at it but it wouldn't budge. He pulled out a knife and started to try and cut through whatever was holding the rock. After an hour of cutting, he cut through the last piece of the rope. He put his knife away and picked up the rock. The minute is was off the ground, the wall started to turn. Locke stared in awe at what was on the other side of the wall and what wa at the end of the hatch. |
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lostzilla Expert Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 4:50 am Post subject: |
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OK the Hatch! what's in the hatch?
and Yay!! finally getting some! Lucky me. LOL _________________
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ebizmybef74 Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 4:55 am Post subject: |
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go nate!
Way to be discreet when asking her if she was seeing anyone! _________________
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lostzilla Expert Vidder
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:00 am Post subject: |
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You're welcome.
You don't get to find out what's in the hatch 'til ep seven.
I'll let you all know rigt now, the blood in the cave was NOT Aaron's. |
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ebizmybef74 Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:04 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | the blood in the cave was NOT Aaron's. |
*crosses fingers*
Please let it be Shannon's. Please let it be Shannon's. Please let it be Shannon's. Please let it be Shannon's. _________________
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:04 am Post subject: |
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You'll find out whose in chapter 6, which I'm writing right now and should be up in 10 minutes or so. |
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ebizmybef74 Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:06 am Post subject: |
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YES!
I probably should be going to bed soon but I will def. stay up just to read the next chapter. _________________
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:16 am Post subject: |
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Yes, I know it's short. Episode Four should start tomorrow.
Chapter Six
Shannon woke up. Her head was bleeding from hitting a sharp rock on the fall down. "Claire, are you okay?" She looked down at Claire's leg. Blood was slowly leaking out of the wound. "Oh, crap." She saw Aaron lying on the gronud asleep. She stood up and went over to the rocks. Whoever shot Claire was gone. "Help! Somebody! Claire's been shot! Help!"
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Nathan walked through the jungle, looking for the source of the noise. As he walked, a tree flew out of the ground next to him. He fellto the ground and looking up. He looked into the eyes of the monster in shock. He never knew they really existed. "We're almost there."
Nathan and Liz could see the lights at the beach. " I didn't think anyone would have gone back yet," Nate said. "It is weird."
They walked out of the jungle. They came around the corner of the beach. They stopped in shock. They didn't see anyone they knew, any of the camp tents or any part of the plane they knew. What they saw was the tail of the plane. |
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ebizmybef74 Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:19 am Post subject: |
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ebizmybef74 Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:22 am Post subject: |
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why does claire have to be shot?!?!?
*bawls*
You can't let her die!
*grabs movieguy's shirt and shakes him*
DON'T DO IT!
Wow, I am getting waaaaaaaay to emotional for this story.
Yes, it's that good. _________________
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:24 am Post subject: |
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Thanks! Always happy when someone bawls becuase of my story.
Is she in the poll?
No. She'll be fine. |
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ebizmybef74 Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:25 am Post subject: |
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*wipes away tears*
really?
I didn't realize that. Life is good now!!!!!!
But that bad thing is, Charlie is on that list.
You can't have C/Cness without one of the C's!!! _________________
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 5:34 am Post subject: |
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"What?" asked Anna.
No Nate/Anna. It's Nate/Liz now.
Who else is Nathanabeth?
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