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Captain Freya
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Captain Freya
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 Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 3:30 am Post subject: Dark Movie Trailer by Captain Freya |
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Comments would be greatly appreciated btw  |
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SassyLostie2
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| Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 4:37 am Post subject: Dark Movie Trailer by Captain Freya |
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| I thought that the dialogue fit well, and the clips worked...the story was excellently portrayed and very creative. Only one thing, the sweet tattoos scene at the end kind of stole away from the dark angsty-ness that had left us hanging. It would have been much better if you'd left it at there,without that scene, and had a sudden title etc. Still, I give you a silver. Nice job! I have a few trailers myself, so I know that they're hard. In fact, I think this may be more creative than mine. |
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SassyLostie2
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| Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 4:43 am Post subject: Dark Movie Trailer by Captain Freya |
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| Oh yeah, one more thing. The split second scene of Kate and Sawyer's in the cages, didn't make it look like rape and since Jack referenced 'what happened in the hatch' it didn't fit. Also, Jack's line at 1:48-49 was somewhat unintelligible. I couldn't tell what he was saying. But I ain't' really one to talk, I admittedly have my own problems with my vids, and this was likely much better than mine. I'm a Skater btw, and I enjoyed it, so there. hehe |
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secret_neo
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| Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 2:03 pm Post subject: Dark Movie Trailer by Captain Freya |
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| not to bad, a little to lengthy for some parts but the storyline stood out well. |
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buffyfan145
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| Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 4:14 pm Post subject: Dark Movie Trailer by Captain Freya |
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| Good job!!! The dialoge parts helped tell the story and it was believable the way you put it together!!! I think I would definetly see this movie!!! LOL |
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Captain Freya
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| Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 8:16 pm Post subject: Dark Movie Trailer by Captain Freya |
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| Thanks for all your comments. I kinda wanted to add that little bit at the end to highlight how cutesy and happy they used to be and to remind the viewer that it aint all darkness and stuff. I did wonder whether or not to put it in but I just kinda wanted to end it in a cuter way. Also, the cage bit, I thought maybe the clip was fast enough to make it look like she wasn't kissing him back. That's what I focused on her hands above her head. Thought it could look a little ambiguous. Thanks for all comments. |
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Ash13
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| Wow - I loved it! Especially the bit where Kate is crying and you have the audio of when Sawyer is getting hit by Pickett playing. The whole thing totally rocked. |
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