Lost Video Island

lostzilla · Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:39 am Post subject:

You'd better keep him man. LOL I'm sure he'll bring in a lot of female fans. Good for ratings.

LOL
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MovieGuy · Advanced Vidder Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022

He's staying. I've been told he would bring in a lot of male fans too.

Oh, and more then just one person will die in the next chapter.

lostzilla · Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:55 am Post subject:

LOL ok so Nathan's safe, whose blood is it then?
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MovieGuy · Advanced Vidder Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022

coughcoughWarren'sbloodcoughcough LOL

You'll have to wait and find out.

lostzilla · Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:59 am Post subject:

LOL Warren's not gonna like that man.

Well maybe kate found another survivor, Warren who was attacked by the monster and came for help. Guess who'd come to Warren's rescue? Nathan! LOL and then we have the whole Obewan/Anakin storyline.
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Hobbes · Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 3:26 am Post subject:

As long as I end up saying "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" at some point, I'm happy

Just don't kill Locke

he's not ALLOWED to die

ebizmybef74 · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Posts: 2641

lol. Elizabeth is my name. Is Elizabeth (who was only mentioned briefly) going to have a bigger part. Can she put Charlie and Claire back together?
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Aislynn · Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 4:13 am Post subject:

You know, it occurs to me that I've never read another fanfic where the readers are soooo demanding! LOL!

We just keep telling poor MovieGuy who to bring in, who to kill, who not to kill, and all that! Sorry, dude!

That said, if Sawyer's not available, I'm sure Aislynn would be glad to...arm-wrestle Nathan for the last Diet Cherry Pepsi left on the island...

But whatever works best, plot-wise will be great, I'm sure...

Can't wait for the update! Geez, that "wait for 12 weeks" thing made me say, "Hey!" out loud!

~Aislynn

MovieGuy · Advanced Vidder Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022

I know, the only demands only fics get are write more.

Is it good that people are what to write even though I'm not listeneing to any of them? Except for Aislynn thing

MovieGuy · Advanced Vidder Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022

Chapter Four

T W O H O U R S E A R L I E R

Kate looked around. How could that polar bear just disappear? she thought. Just then, she a rustle in the bushes and out came Nathan. She screamed. He screamed.
"Oh my God! What are you doing? Just standing here screaming at people?"
"Did you see it?"
"See what?"
"The bear."
"What? A polar bear?"
"Yes, it just attacked me." Just then, they heard the roar of the monster.Kate heard screams coming from the hatch. She ran into the jungle.
"What the hell are you doing!?" Nathan watched Kate run into the jungle. He hadn't heard a thing.

--

The man threw his gun down his bag. He then dropped Walt's limp legs. "What did you do to him!?" yelled the scruffy bearded leader. "He started to run so I shot him."
"You don't shoot HIM with the taser!"
"I'll shoot whoever I want."
"Are you gonna shoot me?"
"Hell yeah!"
"Come on! Shoot me!"
"Stop!" A dirty thin man ran up to them from the shore. "They made back to land."
"They did?"
"Yeah."
"Well, guess we've got to blow 'em up."

--

Kate ran up to the hatch. Locke looked at her. "Did you bring anyone?"
"What?"
"People, to help move the log."
"Where you just attacked?"
"No." Cynthia stood up and walked over to her. "What are you talking about?"
"The monster. I just heard--" Another tree was pulled out of the ground as the monster screamed. The tree's roots stabbed into Cynthia's body and blood flew everywhere. Kate watched and started to scream.

--

A dirty woman, 16 years old at least, slowly walked around the cave's exterior. She found a small hole in the trees and threw in a wet rag with a rope attached to it. Before se threw it in, she lit the rope's end on fire and quickly threw it in.

It rolled along the cave floor and stopped next to Aaron's crib.Shannon and Claire were talking and didn't notice the bomb. "Do you smell that?" asked Shannon. Claire went over and sniffed Aaron's rag diaper. "He pooped. Let's take him somewhere where people won't complain about the smell." Claire picked up Aaron and walked with Shannon to another part of the cave. Hurley walked by them. He had finally gotten some new batteries for his walkman. He was listening to some music and the battery died. "Not again." He stopped right next to the rag. The fire was getting close to the rag. He hit against the crib and it started to play again. He walked on.

Kate rushed in from the jungle, covered in blood. "Dude!" Hurley jumped and ran over to her, as did Jack.

"What happened? Are you okay?"
"This isn't my blood."
"What?"
Just then, the bomb exploded.

Hobbes · Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 5:39 am Post subject:

NICE

And don't feel like you need to write anyone into the story. In fact... don't do so at all

it's better like this!

WHAT HAPPENED WITH THE BOMB!!!! WE MUST KNOW PRECIOUS!!! MOREMOREMORE

ebizmybef74 · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Posts: 2641

wha? Too much........can't handle it...............that was an AWESOME chapter!

OMG! I was freaking out when the bomb got close to Aaron's crib! I was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
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lostzilla · Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 12:11 pm Post subject:

I want more!

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MovieGuy · Advanced Vidder Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022

You'll get more tonight and somebod important (not Cynthia

) is gonna die.

I hope no ne named cynthia reads that. They'll want Cynthia back in.

No more demands from anyone!

I had more stuff written where just about everyone in the caves stops right next to the bomb. Cut for length. If anyone wants to read it, let me know and I'll put that stuff up.