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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 8:20 am    Post subject: Starboard -- Fan Fic Reply with quote

I was bored. Starts immediately after Exodus.

"Walt!" Michael started to try and swim after the boat which was carrying his son. But by the time he started to swim, it was already gone. He stopped and just floated in the ocean. He didn't know what to do. He strained his eyes seeing if he could see the boat. He could still hear Walt screaming far off in the distance.

"Michael!" Michael twisted around in the water to see Jin holding an unconsious Sawyer in his arms. Jin and Sawyer started to sink under the water. Michael wanted to go help Jin but could still hear Walt screaming. He turned toward Walt's screams wich suddenly stopped. "Walt! Walt!" He heard nothing.

He finally turned around and dove under the water. He could see Jin struggling to hold up Sawyer. He went over and helped him pull up Sawyer. He looked down at Sawyer's side. Blood was pouring out of him. He didn't know what they could do. The raft was on fire and they were at least 15 miles from the island.

He and Jin pulled Sawyer over to a piece of the destroyed raft. They plopped Sawyer down on it. "Michael!" Michael turned to Jin who was pointing at the boat. "Starboard!" Michael looked and saw that the starboard wasn't on fire. "Stay with him!" he told Jin. Jin shook his head as if he understood.

Michael swam over and jumped on the only piece of raft that wasn't on fire. He looked around as he felt bamboo cracking under his feet. He grabbed a stray stick of bamboo floating in the water and started trying to split the starboard from the rest of the raft. He started to stab it into the raft. "Yo, Mikey!"

Michael looked up from his pad of drawing paper. He was sitting in the hospital with a broken leg. "Dad!" he said to the elderly man who entered the room. "How's the leg doin'?" his father asked. "Um, it's broken as it was yesterday." His father laughed and plopped himself down in the chair he'd sit in whenever he visited Michael.

"I know she came." "You do? How'd you find out?" "Your mother told me." "How could Mom have found out?" "She's been keeping tabs on you." That's what I get for having a mom who worked for the CIA, Michael thought. "Anyway, did you see Walt?" "Psst! Are you kidding? He's with Brian. Oh, Brian's her--" "Boyfriend, I know. Your mom told me that." Michael chuckled. His father also laughed but suddenly stopped and coughed. "Dad?" Michael's father grabbed at his arm and fell to the ground. "Dad! Hey, somebody help!"


Michael finally broke the last piece of bamboo connecting the starboard. It broke free and Michael was thrown by the violent thrust into the water. He quickly recovered and swam over to Jin. "Come on we gotta head back!" "Walt?" Michael stopped and looked in the direction the boat left. He strained his eyesand saw something he was hoping for. The light on the front of the boat quickly flashed. "The Others." Michael realized he had come face-to-face with the Others that Danielle has talked about. "We've got to go now!" He started to help Jin put Sawyer on the little piece of raft.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 9:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Damn that was good! I was completely taken off-guard when you put a flashback into it too! I don't normally read the fanfics, but that was great!
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 11:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks! Here's chapter 2.

Chapter Two

Jack and Locke looked down into the hatch. "What's in there?" asked Kate. "I don't know." started Jack. "It's- It's-" "It's a ladder." replied Locke. "Dude, this isn't good. This isn't good." rambled Hurley. "What's not good about this, Hurley?" asked Jack. "The numbers! The numbers aren't good! They're really bad!" "Wait, calm down. What numbers?" "Those numbers!" Hurley pointed to the side of the hatch which had the numbers written on it. Jack got up and looked at the side of the hatch. "4 8 15 16 23 42?" "Dude." "What's the problem with that?" "I won the lotto with those numbers." "What?" "You can talk about this later, Hugo." said Locke. "We have to go down." "John, the ladder is broken off." said Jack. "We can make one."

"How are we gonna make one?" asked Kate. "It's rather simple," said Locke "tons of bamboo around here--" "We don't know how far down it goes. It could--" "The island will help--" "Dammit, John! Stop all this island crap!" yelled Jack. Everyone stopped and looked at him. "I'm going back to the caves" said Jack as he grabbed up his backpack. "Dude, wait for me!" Hurley stumbled over to his bag and ran after Jack.

Locke looked over to Kate. "Well, I guess it's just you and me, Kate."

--

Michael and Jin were pushing the broken down piece of raft back toward the island. Michael knew they had only gone a few hundred yards and they were both tired from everything that had happened. "Jin, stop!" Jin stopped pulling it as Michael pulled himself up next to Sawyer. He felt Sawyer's pulse. "We've got to hurry. He's not doing too good." Michael stood up to jump off the raft. He looked over in the direction where he thought Walt was. That's all he was thinking about. He heard a crack under him and felt a horrific pain in his leg. "Michael!" Jin yelled but it was too late. Michael looked down at the sharp piece of broken bamboo that had stabbed into his leg. "What's going on?!"

Some paramedics rushed into the room and quickly got Michael's father out of the room. "What happened?! He is going to be okay?" The doctor turned to him. "Calm down, sir. Your father had a heart attack. He should be fine." The doctor started to leave. "Wait! What do you mean 'should?' What do you mean?"

"What do you mean?!"
Michael looked around. "Dad!" "Wal--!" He tried to turn around but passed out from the searing pain after moving his leg so several splinters shot out of the bamboo. As he fell into the ocean, the bamboo slid out of his leg. He made a huge splash in the water.

Jin looked around and then cursed in Korean. He let go of the raft and started to swim after Michael's body falling lower and lower into the ocean. He swam down and quickly scooped him up. He threw him down next to Sawyer and started trying to pull the raft back toward the island. "Help!" he yelled. "Help!"

--

Kate dropped some bamboo down in front of the hatch. Locke already had a few steps of the ladder finished. It was starting to become early morning. "So, what did you do in the real world, John?" Locke looked up the ladder. Somehow he felt this had happened before. "I worked at a box company." "Really?" asked Kate. "Yeah." He looked into her eyes. "What did you do?"

"Unemployed," said Kate. "No. What did you do?" Kate stopped and looked at him. "Do you mean--?" "Yes." "I-- I--" "I won't tell anyone if you're worried." "I--

--

Several hours had passed and Jin could barely move anymore. He had covered at least three miles pulling Sawyer and Michael. The sun was starting to rise. He looked around. He could see the island far off in the distance. He noticed the tide was helping him move the raft. He finally stopped and lied down on the top of the raft. He sat up and checked Sawyer's pulse. There was nothing.
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PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2005 5:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

MovieGuy, you'd best revive my sweet Southern boy in Chapter 3, you hear???

*screaming* Ahhhhhhh!!!

I volunteer to do mouth-to-mouth on him, though...

~Aislynn

PS - Keep writing, huh? I'm already in "Lost" withdrawl and it hasn't even been a week yet! Fanfics and vids are gonna be the only way I'll make it through the summer!

Great job!
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PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2005 5:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Movieguy, because of you, I'm gonna go start reading fanfics! I never knew they could be so good!
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PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2005 6:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*starts to write Aisylnn into fic*

I'm still trying to figure what I'm going to do with Sawyer. I want to have someone die in this but Sawyer is one of my favorite characters.

I almost hinted at Kate dying with her asking Locke what h did in the real world, but I don't want her to die either.

Also, be ready for Charlie and Claire's first big fight in Chapter 3!

Glad to get you into reading fics, Hobbes!
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PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2005 6:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Also, be ready for Charlie and Claire's first big fight in Chapter 3!

YEE-HAW!
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PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2005 7:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Had to put the big C/C fight on hold until chapter four in order to have a good cliffhanger 'til chapter four.

Chapter Three

"Michael!" "Mom!" Michael rolled up to his mother in his wheelchair. "Is he going to be okay?" "The doctors aren't sure yet. There's a good possibility he'll be okay they say." "I'm not so sure." "What? Why?" Michae looked at his and rolled off. "Why, Michael?" she asked him. Michael sighed and turned around to face her. "You didn't see him, Mom. He-- he-- I've never seen anyoe in that much pain in my life." "Mike--" "I want to be alone right now. Could you go?" His mother left the room. He rolled over to his bed and stopped. He started to cry. "Michael!"

Michael jumped awake and screamed in pain. He looked over to see Jin giving Sawyer mouth-to-mouth. He pulled himself over to them. "What's wrong with him?" Jin pointing to his heart. "No!" he yelled to Michael. "Oh, crap!" Michael started to pund on his chest. "Jin! Get off and get back us to island!" "Yes!" Jin jumped off and started to pull the raft. Michael started to give him CPR. Still nothing.

--

Charlie looked around. He had wandering into part of the cave no one ever went. He dropped his bag. He fell to his knees and pulled out the statue he took from the plane. He broke it open. A dozen little bags of heroin fell out of it. He smiled as he looked down at them. He picked one up and opened. He fell over just from the smell. H stuck his finger into the bag and shoved his finger into his mouth. He closed his eyes and rolled over on to his back. He breathed a sigh of relief and quickly back for more.

--

Kate handed Locke the torch he had asked for. "Why did you want this, John?" "I'm gonna check to see how deep this shaft goes." He stood over the darkness in the hatch and dropped the torch into it. He and Kate watched it plummet down, deeper and deeper. It finally disappeared. "That isn't a good sign," Kate said. "Wait!" Locke yelled. She stopped as they heard a thud at the bottom of the hatch.

Locke looked up and smiled at her. "It's gonna be a big ladder."

--

Charlie stood up after having his first fix in such a long time. "Charlie!" Charlie jumped when he heard Claire yell his name. He had picked up his backpack and had dropped it in the shock of hearing her. Little bags of heroin rolled out of his bag and scattered across the cave floor. He jumped down to pick them up but it was too late. "Charlie!" Charlie looked down and jumped up. Claire (carrying Aaron) walked into the little cave. Thank God she hasn't looked down Charlie thought. She walked towards him and stepped over the bags. Oh, thank God.

"Charlie, I need some help with Aaron." "Sure." She turned around to leave and stepped on a bag. Crap thought Charlie.

--

Jack and Hurley were walking thorugh the jungle. Hurley had just finished telling Jack his story. "That's weird," Jack said. "I know, dude." "Well, I'm not sure exactly what's down there, but I starting to have a feeling it's not good." "Dude, it's probably spoiled Twinkies." Jack laughed but quickly stopped as soon as he heard the monster's roar. Hurley moaned and whispered "Dude, I'm tired. I don't wanna run." "Sorry, but it looks like you'll have to." Jack and Hurley started to run in the direction of the caves.

--

Kate and Locke were looking in the direction they heard the monster. "It's not coming this way," said Locke. "Are you sure?" asked Kate. "Positive." Just then a tree is pulled out the ground next to the hatch and as Kate and Locke jumped back from the pressue they heard the piercing scream of the monster.


Sorry, Aisylnn. Looks like you're gonna have to wait a while 'til you find out if your sweet Southern boy makes it.

I'm secretly enjoyed Aisylnn's screms
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PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2005 9:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I saw that!

Send me in, Coach! I'm ready for my big CPR moment! We must save the Sweet Southern Boy! Sacrifice Jack if you have to, but SAVE SAWYER!!!

~Aislynn
(who's now hated by Jaters everywhere... )
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PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2005 10:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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We must save the Sweet Southern Boy! Sacrifice Jack if you have to, but SAVE SAWYER!!!


That's not right Aislynn. LOL Maybe Sawyer dies and then he comes back later as one of the others. How's that?
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PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2005 4:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, Sawyer's fate will be decided in the next chapter.

AS for Jack dying, no.

NOTE: Aislynn might not like his chapter.
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PostPosted: Tue May 31, 2005 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter Four

Michael was drawing on his pad of paper when the doctor cem in. "Mr. Dawson--" "Is he okay?" Michael suddenly interrupted the doctor. "Listen, please." Michael stopped talking and looked at the doctor. "I've got some bad news." "Come on!"

Michael was giving Sawyer CPR and Jin, who had jumped on to help was hitting his chest, was up with him. "Sawyer, come on!" Michael started to also pound on his chest. There was still nothing.

--

Claire picked up the bag she had stepped on. "What is this?" she asked Charlie. "It's-- uh, it's--" "Is this heroin?" she asked him. "Y-Yes," moaned Charlie. "I thought you quit!" Claire yelled. "I-- I--" "Don't!" Charlie reached out to touch her but she pulled away. "Don't come near me or Aaron!" Claire angrily walked away with Aaron in her arms. Charlie looked around and sat down on the cold cave floor.

--

The smoke had finally cleared and Kate stood up and looked around. "John?" She walked over to the area she thought he had flown. "John?" "I'm over here." John got up from under a pile of dirt and shook off. Kate turned around and stopped and looked at the hatch. "It is a security system." They looked at the hatch. The five trees pulled out of the ground during the attack were covering the entrance to the hatch.

--

Claire was sitting next to the waterfall in the cave. Sayid and Shannon were sitting next to her. Charlie walked around the corner and started to come over to Claire. "Get away," she yelled at him. "But, Claire--" "Sayid!" Sayid stopped what he was doing and looked to Claire. "Yes?" "Can you please escort Charlie out of here."

--

Michael was still pounding on his chest. Jin felt his pulse. There was still nothing. Jin stopped and sat down next to Sawyer's body. "Michael." Michael was still pounding on his chest. "Michael!" Michael looked up at Jin. "No." Michael sat back and looked at the dead Sawyer.

Don't want to be on when Aislynn reads this.
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

MOVIE GUY!!!!

How CAN you sleep at night?



Revive that boy immediately!!! Charlie was all dead and everything and HE came back, now didn't he?

And no, 'zilla, I'd rather not have a sweet Southern Others/Zombie boy in place of the original, thank you very much...

I see no reason that, since there are still plenty of passengers we haven't "met" yet, there couldn't be one named Aislynn who happens to know CPR! Life-restoring CPR! Southern boy life-restoring CPR!

*wails* MOVIEGUY, don't DOOOO this to me!!!



Otherwise, great fic...

~Aislynn

PS - And glad you put your banner up here too. I felt goofy being the only one with mine up but I can't log into Lost-Media and put it up there, so what else could I do? (Clearly, not putting it up somewhere was NOT an option! LOL! )
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

write more! Faster! Moooooooorrrre! I liked the idea that the monster defends the hatch like that, it's verrrry peculiar
Would it be okay if Sawyer comes back to life as just a floating muscular torso...? And maybe if you're lucky, he'll have the lowe half of his face so you can see his southern dimples!
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hobbes wrote:
Would it be okay if Sawyer comes back to life as just a floating muscular torso...? And maybe if you're lucky, he'll have the lower half of his face so you can see his southern dimples!


No. I'm an all-or-nothing kinda gal! And I wants him alive again, pretty please! Don't torture the old lady of the board, huh?

And I agree, write faster!

~Aislynn
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