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EMMALOUISE Expert Vidder
Joined: 28 Jun 2009 Posts: 439 Location: England
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littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:11 am Post subject: |
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that was very cool love the triangle very awesome AU idea and definitely a new fave of mine and i LOVE the inclusion of the Crossroads demon Some crit tho...
the flashes were a little weird throughout because they didnt seem to go on the beat. I would also not have had kate/dean have different voices. that was a little weird; especially Kate having Claire's voice and dean having Sawyer's at the end And the cutting of the clips was scattered. Like jumping from clip to clip from the same scene; it was distracting. Perhaps if you had just slowed it down rather than flickering around it would have looked better.
Keep at it tho you're definitely getting better! _________________
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EMMALOUISE Expert Vidder
Joined: 28 Jun 2009 Posts: 439 Location: England
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:38 am Post subject: Kate/Dean/Jack AU Breath me by EMMALOUISE |
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Thankyou for the nice comment i'm so annoyed at myself about the flashes i might redo the vid and take them out i know it was wierd having claires voiceover but i struggled to find the right words. |
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SassyLostie2 Expert Vidder
Joined: 08 Aug 2007 Posts: 28138 Location: California
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Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 4:27 am Post subject: Kate/Dean/Jack AU Breath me by EMMALOUISE |
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Wow, that was really cool. I liked the idea for the triangle, and I loved the Dean/Kate pairing. Good job on a pretty vid, your overall editing was really nice, though you did have a few harsh cuts. And like Kat, the different voices thing. I didn't even notice them much and they didn't bother me at all until the Claire and Sawyer lines, cuz the voices were so different, but the other ones were fine. I think it's just the accents. Other than that, I loved it. You should definitely make another Kate/Dean vid soon, I really liked this one. |
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